Yeah, the hotness of Angel/Puppy/Xander is just amazing, and yet it's not something you see much of. All of your points are excellent, and are exactly the reasons why I love this story so much. Puppy and Angel with their distinct and different dominance(s?) are lovely, and that makes them a lot of fun to play with, especially when it's Xander that they're playing with.
Xander's training should definitely be written about. I don't know about next, though... I kinda feel like there should be some plotty stuff in there before the next night. We'll see, though!
Heeeeee :) Yeah, we have no problem with the 'Daddy' bit either, to be completely honest. But since this wasn't really explicitly daddy!kink, I didn't want to scare away any readers who might enjoy it.
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Yeah, the hotness of Angel/Puppy/Xander is just amazing, and yet it's not something you see much of. All of your points are excellent, and are exactly the reasons why I love this story so much. Puppy and Angel with their distinct and different dominance(s?) are lovely, and that makes them a lot of fun to play with, especially when it's Xander that they're playing with.
Xander's training should definitely be written about. I don't know about next, though... I kinda feel like there should be some plotty stuff in there before the next night. We'll see, though!
Heeeeee :) Yeah, we have no problem with the 'Daddy' bit either, to be completely honest. But since this wasn't really explicitly daddy!kink, I didn't want to scare away any readers who might enjoy it.