Kink_Bingo square: Exposure/Striptease

Yes, I'm working on the prompts you guys left, but I've also been wanting to play with art a bit since it's been a long time. I'd like feedback - I'm not sure if I should submit as-is, or do more work to this... bear in mind that I have pretty much no graphic editing program right now, so I couldn't even play with the contrast, okay? What you get is what my scanner spits out. And, uh, it's been a long time since I drew stuff. But please leave feedback and don't worry about sparing my feelings... I'd rather know if it sucks, okay?

Update: Grrr, Ronon has been censored by Photobucket *grumpy face* unfairly, since there was no nudity and he still had most of the fluffy little towel on. I need to tattoo him anyhow, and then I'll host him elsewhere.