I kinda heart creepy John. Everyone has their breaking point, and I love his slow crawl over the edge - grief could do funny things to you, as he said. I like that even though he's turning into a monster (and not even realizing it), it's kinda *because* he's a good man who loves his kids so much rather than in spite of it, and this last hit is just more than he can take and stay sane.

Besides, the creepy makes me feel better about him being dead (if he is) and makes future stalkery ficlets more fun to write if he's not dead :) Thanks again for helping me take off the rough edges!